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Story of the World

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I’ve sometimes wondered
If I were really in Paradise
That the world had already ended
That God had already fixed everything
That everything would be all right
I look at all the happiness
How much the world has improved
How it’s so much better than before
We’ve invented miracles
Manufactured providence
And it would seem that we, in a way
Have become Gods ourselves
That we’ve fixed the world ourselves.

Then, I take a second look at the world
I see people caring only for themselves
I see little children cursing and killing
I see us destroying our planet
I see the companies, cheating and lying
All for the sake of a few more dollars
I see the rich getting richer
And the poor getting poorer
I see hate.
And I think, no,
This can’t be Paradise
This is Hell,
And that God has damned us all to destroy ourselves
In an Inferno of our own creation
And I weep

But then, I take a third look
I see kindness
I see people helping others
I see the people bravely trying to save us all
From ourselves
And I say to myself,
This isn’t Heaven
Or Hell
This is Earth
This is our Earth,
And whether it becomes Paradise
Or Damnation
Is all up to us.
Just a cruddy little poem I whipped up in 10 minutes., cuz I haven't submitted written stuff for a while.
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AkwardRocketFairy's avatar
This one is amazing as well,
I really love it.
However it may not be as great for the contest you're talking about,
because it doesn't necessarilly flow as well.
It is great though I love this one. Epicness. =D